Feedback For Second Cut

This is the feedback from our teacher about what needs improving on our first rough cut.

Second Cut

Diary Of The Day Filming

First Very Rough Cut

Feed Back From The Teacher

Marking Other Students Work (Extinct)

Final Location

The final location for filming, I chose public footpath 27 which is on Margret avenue in Shenfield for the filming location for the thriller as it is excluded for the public, so that we would be able to film without the worrying about the public when we were using the pen knife. This was also appropriate for the filming as it fitted the specification and the stereotypes of a thriller.